User talk:Falghane

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Week 1 Feedback

I am posting the feedback on your Week 1 assignment here.

  • Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
  • All of the requested items were found on your user page except for what is noted below. You have the opportunity to go back and fix these items to earn back points that you lost on the assignment. The changes will be due at midnight February 7, when the Week 3 assignment is due.
    • Please make your e-mail address a link. You can either make it a "mailto" link directly, or format it so that users can e-mail you through OpenWetWare.
    • Creating a link to within the wiki was missing from your user page because you did not invoke your template on the page. The way to invoke your template is to use curly braces to surround the template name, such as {{template name}}.
    • The category was also missing from your User page because you did not invoke the template.
    • As we go forward in the semester, you will be adding links to the weekly assignment page, your individual journal pages, and the class shared pages to your template, and then you will invoke this template on your individual journal page. You can even do all of this in advance.
    • Please link your name on the course People page to your user page.
    • You provided an external link to the Biology Department. It showed up as just a number because you did not give it a visible label. To do so, the syntax is [http://cse.lmu.edu/department/biology/ Biology Department] where there is a space between the URL and label text.
    • When using headers, don't use the single "=" sign. That level is reserved for the title of the page. Start with "==" and then nest "===" and "====" beneath each other; don't skip levels. I.e., don't go directly from "==" to "====", bypassing "===".
    • When you reference the Week 1 Assignment page, please use the APA format for a website.
    • You wrote something in the summary field only 14% of the time. We are aiming towards writing something in that field all the time (100%).
    • Don't forget to sign your contribution to the class journal page with your wiki signature.
  • I hope that you will begin to see yourself as a mathematician in this class!

Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 11:12, 28 January 2019 (PST)

Week 2 Feedback

  • Thank you for completing your assignment on time.
  • You will be receiving a hard copy of your individual journal with corrections.
  • I want to note here, however, that you need to have a link to your User page from your individual journal page. The only link that existed was in your wiki signature in the Acknowledgements section. Please add a link to your User page to your template and this will be taken care of in the future.
  • Similarly, you need to link to the assignment page from the journal page; the only link was found in the References section. Make sure that is also added to your template
  • You were also missing the BIOL398/S19 category from the page. Again, adding this to your template and invoking your template on the page will take care of this in the future.
  • In addition, you were missing a link from your User page to the shared journal as of the Week 2 deadline, but I note that you have subsequently fixed this.
  • You wrote something in the summary field 24/29 times for 83%. This is solid, but could have some improvement to get >90% of the time.

Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 08:46, 19 February 2019 (PST)