User talk:EdwardRyanTalatala

Week 1 Feedback

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• All of the requested items were found on your user page except for what is noted below. You have the opportunity to go back and fix these items to earn back points that you lost on the assignment. The changes will be due at midnight February 7, when the Week 3 assignment is due.
  • Please correct the category to [[Category:BIOL388/S19]]. I had made a mistake in the assignment by not updating it to the current semester. I did not take off points for this, but I do request that you change it.
  • When using headers, don't use the single "=" sign. That level is reserved for the title of the page. Start with "==" and then nest "===" and "====" beneath each other; you have three levels, but I'd like you to adjust them to starting with "==".
  • The name of the file for your resume is a little generic. Please rename it using your name in the filename.
  • Some of the photos in your Instagram feed are not professional. Since this is a public-facing site that may be viewed by employers, I think you should not link to your personal Instagram account, and choose a different external website to link to.
  • The Acknowledgments and References section should have been on your User page, not on the shared page. I may have misunderstood the questions in class. Please move it to your user page.
  • You need to reference the Week 1 Assignment using the APA format for a webpage.
  • You wrote something in the summary field 67% of the time. We are aiming for 100%.
• I'm glad to know that the Stewart reading opened your eyes to the math around us!

— Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 17:29, 28 January 2019 (PST)

Week 2 Feedback

• Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
• You will be receiving a hard copy of your individual journal with corrections.
• The only link to your user page from your journal page was in your wiki signature, please add a link to your user page to your template.
• The only link to the assignment instruction page was in your references section. Please add the links to the assignment pages to your template.
• You wrote something in the summary field 100% of the time, excellent work!
• You did not include a Purpose for the assignment.
• Make sure that you reference the Assignment page in your References section.

—Kam D. Dahlquist (talk) 09:16, 19 February 2019 (PST)