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== Week 3 Feedback ==
* Be sure to complete your assignments by the deadline.
* Your assignment was complete, except for a few things for your outline.  Be sure to explain '''''all''''' the figures and tables in your outline, even if you are not assigned to present them in class.  Also, your outline was missing the comparison with other studies that Markham et al. (1998) talked about in their Discussion section.
''— [[User:Kam D. Dahlquist|Kam D. Dahlquist]] 17:08, 8 October 2014 (EDT)''
== Week 4 Feedback ==
== Week 4 Feedback ==



Revision as of 14:08, 8 October 2014

Week 3 Feedback

  • Be sure to complete your assignments by the deadline.
  • Your assignment was complete, except for a few things for your outline. Be sure to explain all the figures and tables in your outline, even if you are not assigned to present them in class. Also, your outline was missing the comparison with other studies that Markham et al. (1998) talked about in their Discussion section.

Kam D. Dahlquist 17:08, 8 October 2014 (EDT)

Week 4 Feedback

  • I am giving feedback in reverse order from Week 4 to Week 2 because that will be most useful to you.
  • Thank you for submitting your Week 4 journal on time
  • You have performed a very thorough documentation of your work in your electronic lab notebook and have an excellent discussion of your results. A couple of minor points:
    • You can combine your methods/results/answers to questions into one narrative instead of separating it out by those sections. This will make things flow better and cut down on the redundancy of what you are saying in response to the questions.
    • You can make your images larger on the page. You are using the formatting that was used to create the "thumbnail" images on the User pages with the border and caption. In this case, larger images would be preferable to better see your results. You can leave out that code to see the image at its native size. If you still want to control the size of the image, there is wiki formatting you can look up that does so.
  • Looking forward to your research presentation next week.

Kam D. Dahlquist 18:27, 24 September 2014 (EDT)


Week 1 Redux

  • Thank you for completing all of the skills on the wiki checklist from Week 1 by this week's deadline.
  • Since your CMSI 499 is your research project, you don't need to list it separately under courses; it is already covered by your research section.

Kam D. Dahlquist 18:12, 10 September 2014 (EDT)

Week 1 Journal Feedback

  • I've finished reviewing your Week 1 assignment and have the following feedback for you. You will have the chance to earn back the points you missed on this assignment by fixing the items below by the Week 2 journal deadline of midnight on Wednesday, September 10.
  • Please be sure to submit all aspects of the assignment on time. Your e-mail to me, as well, as your personal interests/hobbies section of your user page were submitted late.
    • Each time you save a change on a wiki page, you should write something in the Summary field. You are doing it roughly half of the time, but the goal is to do it every time you save a change.
    • You did not technically make a link to a new wiki page, you just linked to existing pages within our wiki. This should be fulfilled by creating your Week 2 journal page.
    • Your external link to LMU should probably go to the LMU home page instead of MYLMU. People who click on that link will expect to go to a general info page, not to an intranet that they can't access.
    • You created a numbered list, but only on the Class Journal page. The assignment was to demonstrate a numbered list on your user page.
    • Make sure that you use multiple levels of headings, not just 2 equals signs, but 3 or more for subheadings.
    • Make sure that you "comment out" something on your user page. The only comments were the ones automatically placed there by OpenWetWare.
    • You need to upload an image file and display it on your page.
    • You need to upload another type of file and link to it on your page.
    • You can delete the automatic text from this talk page after you have read it. You can also delete the I'm a new member of OpenWetWare banner on your user page.
  • Please let me know if you need any assistance with making these changes. Kam D. Dahlquist 19:09, 3 September 2014 (EDT)
  • I've answered your question on my user talk page.