User talk:Helena M. Olivieri

From OpenWetWare

(Difference between revisions)
Jump to: navigation, search
(message that I answered question)
(Week 2 Journal Feedback)
(6 intermediate revisions not shown.)
Line 1: Line 1:
 +
== Week 1 Journal Feedback ==
 +
 +
* Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
 +
* There are a few of things that you need to fix on your individual user page and shared journal page.  Please make these changes by next week's journal deadline (midnight, February 8) to earn back the points you missed on this assignment.
 +
*# You need to put the complete street address for your box at LMU.
 +
*# Please let us know on your user page or via e-mail if you have any worries/concerns about the class and if there is anything else you want us to know, even if the answer is "no".
 +
*# On the Week 1 shared journal page, make a link back to your user page at the top of the section where you answered the questions.
 +
*# You are not using summary field when you make changes to the wiki.  The goal is to fill it out ''every time'' you make a change.
 +
*# Your template is missing.  Please create one and invoke it from your user page and all of your individual journal pages.  It should contain links for each of the class assignment pages, your journal pages, and the class shared journal pages.  It is also helpful to put the class category on it as well.  Currently, the link to the shared journal assignment and the category is currently missing from your user page.  If you put it in your template and then invoke the template, you will never forget to put it in your journal page.
 +
* Please feel free to delete the welcome message from OpenWetWare below.
 +
 +
— [[User:Kam D. Dahlquist|Kam D. Dahlquist]] 19:13, 30 January 2013 (EST)
 +
 +
----
Helena, I answered your question on my [[User_talk:Kam_D._Dahlquist | user talk page]].  ''— [[User:Kam D. Dahlquist|Kam D. Dahlquist]] 20:04, 24 January 2013 (EST)''
Helena, I answered your question on my [[User_talk:Kam_D._Dahlquist | user talk page]].  ''— [[User:Kam D. Dahlquist|Kam D. Dahlquist]] 20:04, 24 January 2013 (EST)''
 +
----
 +
You asked: "Hi Dr. Fitzpatrick, What are some of your hobbies outside of academia? Helena M. Olivieri 01:12, 23 January 2013 (EST)"
-
Hello, Helena M. Olivieri! This is a welcome message from OpenWetWareBy the way, we've announced you on the [[Main Page|home page]]! You can leave messages to any OWW member by editing their User_talk pages like this oneAnd don't forget to personalize your [[User:Helena M. Olivieri|User Page]] so that we can get to know you better! We've included some tips below to get you started.
+
My answer: I have quite a fewI like to travel, when I can afford it and make time for itI (attempt to) play guitarI do some woodworking, and I like to take pictures.
-
== Basic Wiki Instructions ==
+
'''[[User:Ben G. Fitzpatrick|Ben G. Fitzpatrick]] 14:02, 3 February 2013 (EST)'''
-
*'''Don't be afraid to edit!'''  As with all pages on the wiki, all versions are saved so its easy to undo.  If you have any questions feel free to [[Special:Contact|send us an email]].
+
----
-
# Start off by clicking the 'edit' button to the right of this section, or at the top of the page.
+
-
# Now you should see the text of this section as text within an editor box.  There are several buttons in the editor box, but don't worry about those for now.  Just type something in the box, scroll down to the bottom, and hit the 'Preview' button.
+
-
# You should see the web-page and text box views, but now with your edits!  Don't forget to save your changes by clicking 'Save Page'!
+
-
# Editing pages is as easy as that.  There are of course many ways to format your text.  The easiest way to learn is to find an OWW page with the formatting you like, click on the edit button again, and see for yourself how it was created in the text box.  Here's an extensive list of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Tutorial_%28Formatting%29 formating examples]. '''Or look at this OpenWetWare [[OpenWetWare:Welcome|introductory tutorial]]'''. 
+
-
# When you are done, remove these instructions by clicking the edit button for this section again, erase everything you see in the text box and click 'Save Page'. (And remember you can always retrieve these by clicking on the 'history' tab at the top of this page.)
+
-
Note that these instructions apply to ''any'' page on OWW.  Feel free to contribute to OWW by editing pages to add content, update them, or even correct mistakes.  OWW relies on an active community to manage our growing resource of open access information, and we need your help!
+
== Week 2 Journal Feedback ==
-
== Personal/Lab Info ==
+
* For future assignments, please plan ahead and submit your work on time.
-
We have gone ahead and filled in some information you provided us in your membership application on your [[User:Helena M. Olivieri|User Page]]Please take a moment to embellish this and tell the community a little more about you. Put links to your lab pages, your projects and your interestsIf you run out of ideas, take a look at some of the other User pagesFor example, check out [[User:Julius_B._Lucks]], [[User:Jason_R._Kelly]] and [[User:Reshma_P._Shetty]].   
+
* Your discussion is a bit thinYou need to include a little more detail on the simulations you performed.
 +
* Graphs would be very helpful in backing up your discussionSee Elizabeth's page for a good example of a file containing some well-annotated simulations, or Ashley's for graphs embedded in the discussionPaul's screencaps, while a bit difficult to view due to size, may also help you.
 +
* How might you model the ethanol production as a third differential equation? How might it impact the mortality?
-
You'll also notice that we have put an 'image' placeholder at the top of your [[User:Helena M. Olivieri|User Page]].  We encourage you to upload an image of yourself to give OWW a more personal feel.  To upload an image, click on the [[Special:Upload|Upload file]] link on the left-hand side (toolbar).  Choose a file from your computer, and remember the file name.  After you have uploaded the image, you should see it loaded on its own page.  Go back to your [[User:Helena M. Olivieri|User Page]], click on edit, and replace 'OWWEmblem.png' with the name of your file that you have uploaded in the second line of this page.
+
'''[[User:Ben G. Fitzpatrick|Ben G. Fitzpatrick]] 13:52, 4 February 2013 (EST)'''

Revision as of 02:20, 8 February 2013

Week 1 Journal Feedback

  • Thank you for submitting your assignment on time.
  • There are a few of things that you need to fix on your individual user page and shared journal page. Please make these changes by next week's journal deadline (midnight, February 8) to earn back the points you missed on this assignment.
    1. You need to put the complete street address for your box at LMU.
    2. Please let us know on your user page or via e-mail if you have any worries/concerns about the class and if there is anything else you want us to know, even if the answer is "no".
    3. On the Week 1 shared journal page, make a link back to your user page at the top of the section where you answered the questions.
    4. You are not using summary field when you make changes to the wiki. The goal is to fill it out every time you make a change.
    5. Your template is missing. Please create one and invoke it from your user page and all of your individual journal pages. It should contain links for each of the class assignment pages, your journal pages, and the class shared journal pages. It is also helpful to put the class category on it as well. Currently, the link to the shared journal assignment and the category is currently missing from your user page. If you put it in your template and then invoke the template, you will never forget to put it in your journal page.
  • Please feel free to delete the welcome message from OpenWetWare below.

Kam D. Dahlquist 19:13, 30 January 2013 (EST)


Helena, I answered your question on my user talk page. Kam D. Dahlquist 20:04, 24 January 2013 (EST)


You asked: "Hi Dr. Fitzpatrick, What are some of your hobbies outside of academia? Helena M. Olivieri 01:12, 23 January 2013 (EST)"

My answer: I have quite a few. I like to travel, when I can afford it and make time for it. I (attempt to) play guitar. I do some woodworking, and I like to take pictures.

Ben G. Fitzpatrick 14:02, 3 February 2013 (EST)


Week 2 Journal Feedback

  • For future assignments, please plan ahead and submit your work on time.
  • Your discussion is a bit thin. You need to include a little more detail on the simulations you performed.
  • Graphs would be very helpful in backing up your discussion. See Elizabeth's page for a good example of a file containing some well-annotated simulations, or Ashley's for graphs embedded in the discussion. Paul's screencaps, while a bit difficult to view due to size, may also help you.
  • How might you model the ethanol production as a third differential equation? How might it impact the mortality?

Ben G. Fitzpatrick 13:52, 4 February 2013 (EST)

Personal tools