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== Week 1 Feedback ==
Here is the feedback on your Week 1 Assignment. Thank you for completing the bulk of the assignment on time (it is acknowledged that some of your answers to the shared journal were late). Although I am not penalizing for late entries for Week 1, I will start to do so for Week 2.  You may make up the points you missed on this assignment by completing the requested changes by the Week 3 wiki deadline, midnight Tuesday, September 20 (Monday night/Tuesday morning).
* You completed all of the the items in the assignment, except for the following:
** You wrote something in the Summary field for 76 out of 81 changes, or 94% of the time--keep up the good work--we are aiming at 100% of the time, so you're almost there.
** A link to a website external to the OWW wiki is missing.
** You uploaded and linked to a file, but the filename was generic, and potentially easily overwritten by other users.  Be in the habit of adding your name or initials and the date to filenames to make them unique to you.
** You created and invoked your template, but the only thing on it is your category.  You should move your list of assignments, individual journals, and class journals over to the template.
** You included the Acknowledgments section, but you need to include the statement:
*** While I worked with the people noted above, this individual journal entry was completed by me and not copied from another source.
*** Followed by your wiki signature.
** The References section is missing entirely. It needs to be included every week. For Week 1, it can just reference the Week 1 assignment page.
** You can delete all of the auto-text that OpenWetWare placed on your Talk page below my feedback, and the new user template from your User page.
* It is interesting that you mention the patterns you follow in your waitressing job.  Do you find that you are trying to make your work more efficient?
''— [[User:Kam D. Dahlquist|Kam D. Dahlquist]] 03:58, 13 September 2016 (EDT)''
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Hello, Avery Vernon-Moore! This is a welcome message from OpenWetWare.  By the way, we've announced you on the [[Main Page|home page]]! You can leave messages to any OWW member by editing their User_talk pages like this one.  And don't forget to personalize your [[User:Avery Vernon-Moore|User Page]] so that we can get to know you better!  We've included some tips below to get you started.
Hello, Avery Vernon-Moore! This is a welcome message from OpenWetWare.  By the way, we've announced you on the [[Main Page|home page]]! You can leave messages to any OWW member by editing their User_talk pages like this one.  And don't forget to personalize your [[User:Avery Vernon-Moore|User Page]] so that we can get to know you better!  We've included some tips below to get you started.



Revision as of 00:58, 13 September 2016

Week 1 Feedback

Here is the feedback on your Week 1 Assignment. Thank you for completing the bulk of the assignment on time (it is acknowledged that some of your answers to the shared journal were late). Although I am not penalizing for late entries for Week 1, I will start to do so for Week 2. You may make up the points you missed on this assignment by completing the requested changes by the Week 3 wiki deadline, midnight Tuesday, September 20 (Monday night/Tuesday morning).

  • You completed all of the the items in the assignment, except for the following:
    • You wrote something in the Summary field for 76 out of 81 changes, or 94% of the time--keep up the good work--we are aiming at 100% of the time, so you're almost there.
    • A link to a website external to the OWW wiki is missing.
    • You uploaded and linked to a file, but the filename was generic, and potentially easily overwritten by other users. Be in the habit of adding your name or initials and the date to filenames to make them unique to you.
    • You created and invoked your template, but the only thing on it is your category. You should move your list of assignments, individual journals, and class journals over to the template.
    • You included the Acknowledgments section, but you need to include the statement:
      • While I worked with the people noted above, this individual journal entry was completed by me and not copied from another source.
      • Followed by your wiki signature.
    • The References section is missing entirely. It needs to be included every week. For Week 1, it can just reference the Week 1 assignment page.
    • You can delete all of the auto-text that OpenWetWare placed on your Talk page below my feedback, and the new user template from your User page.
  • It is interesting that you mention the patterns you follow in your waitressing job. Do you find that you are trying to make your work more efficient?

Kam D. Dahlquist 03:58, 13 September 2016 (EDT)


Hello, Avery Vernon-Moore! This is a welcome message from OpenWetWare. By the way, we've announced you on the home page! You can leave messages to any OWW member by editing their User_talk pages like this one. And don't forget to personalize your User Page so that we can get to know you better! We've included some tips below to get you started.

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