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==Expert writing (academic and professional)==
==Expert writing (academic and professional)==
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* Interferences between what the writer want and what the reader want.
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* Interferences between what the writer wants and what the reader wants.
** Readers tend to see the world in terms of actions, and thus they look for verbs. But writers store/remember the important concepts of their field as nouns, not verbs.
** Readers tend to see the world in terms of actions, and thus they look for verbs. But writers store/remember the important concepts of their field as nouns, not verbs.
** Readers tend to understand the world in terms of characters (someone/something capable of acting), and they expect to find them in subjects.
** Readers tend to understand the world in terms of characters (someone/something capable of acting), and they expect to find them in subjects.
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** Possible to use nominalizations when they are also perceived by the readers as characters.
** Possible to use nominalizations when they are also perceived by the readers as characters.
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* Structuring long sentences:
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** easier to read when the subject+verb ("core") are together and at (close to) the beginning
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** write long sentences with ("connectors/orientors" + "core" + "other") repeated N times
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Expert writing (academic and professional)

  • Interferences between what the writer wants and what the reader wants.
    • Readers tend to see the world in terms of actions, and thus they look for verbs. But writers store/remember the important concepts of their field as nouns, not verbs.
    • Readers tend to understand the world in terms of characters (someone/something capable of acting), and they expect to find them in subjects.
  • Diagnostics when reading a text:
    • underline verbs and ask if they correspond to significant actions;
    • underline subjects and ask if they correspond to significant characters.
  • Principles of clear writing:
    • express as verbs (rather than nominalizations) the actions one want the readers to focus on;
    • express as subjects the characters one wants the readers to focus on, and be consistent.
  • Tips:
    • Subjects create focus, so choose them according to the readers, but also choose those that are valued by the readers.
    • Possible to use passive verbs when they allow a character to be the subject.
    • Possible to use nominalizations when they are also perceived by the readers as characters.
  • Structuring long sentences:
    • easier to read when the subject+verb ("core") are together and at (close to) the beginning
    • write long sentences with ("connectors/orientors" + "core" + "other") repeated N times


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