User:TheLarry/Notebook/Larrys Notebook/2009/09/30/After Steve1

Steve Koch 00:18, 4 October 2009 (EDT): This is after Steve's changes. I kept Larry's structure, and just revised words and phrases to what I thought better. A very good abstract, I think. The ending I added is awkward, but since it's a good sentiment (open source), I don't care.

Brigette D. Black 04:50, 4 October 2009 (EDT): Looks good to me!